I photoshopped the external image of the DeepWater until the deckplan and external image met in the middle, to a decent degree of personal satisfaction. I have a created a mostly original deckplan using design elements from the DeepWater and other deckplans in Stock Ships. And I made-up a couple StarWarsy technology terms, but it shouldn't be difficult to get their meaning from the name itself and the context. Ultimately though, I don't feel that details of exactly what these two Calamarian trading services are and how they work are really that important. They could represent two different strategies of the planet gaining a better foothold in Republic economies. My idea is that they both were government-funded services, perhaps from different legislative acts with some overlapping years of operation, (and one much more funded and successful than the other). My capsule also refers to the Disney SW comic book Mon Cala Mercantile Fleet, which is a big part of the Canon explanation for the origin of the Rebel fleet in RotJ. Like the Stock Ships DeepWater entry, this capsule refers to the WEG EU Calamari Commercial Expeditionary Service (which I abbreviate "CCES") without going into detail about the nature of this service. (Please read or re-read that before reading this.) The capsule establishes a greater context for both ships. The capsule presumes the reader has read the Stock Ships entry for the DeepWater-class freighter. My current manuscript is about five times better than my first draft, and I am grateful for the help that he was able to provide. If he does, he has earned it with his first pass alone and he will get it. The editor takes a lot of pride in his work, so I don't know if he'll want credit in the final product or not. I just wanted to make clear that if any sentences seem clunky, they are most certainly my wording and not the editor's. I implemented a lot of his capsule text edits and came up with my own so I could now bring this to the public think tank of our community. I further tweaked the deckplans to clarify some capsule text the editor found confusing. I've waited six months so this weekend I decided to proceed to the next phase without further editing. The editor stopped having time to work on this and mentioned another issue. The editor also seemed uncomfortable with my interpretations of some vaguely defined items of EU and Canon continuity. The editor didn't always understand what I was going for and suggested revisions that had improved diction but altered the meaning from my intention. With the first editing pass the grammar and diction were greatly improved in many sentences, but the editor had a handful of content issues. Last May an editor worked on my manuscript of the main capsule and deckplan details. This thread was created for the next phase of the project previously discussed here. I originally set out to make a deckplan for a modified DeepWater-class freighter, and ended up creating a new model of Mon Cal freighter with a capsule, deckplan, and stats. The Stock Ships deckplan and external image for the ship may both represent DeepWaters, but there is no way that they represent the same DeepWater. The DeepWater is a Mon Cal class of ship and each ship is an individual work of art.
#REBEL GALAXY JETTISON CARGO PC#
It is important in my campaigns for PC ships to have a deckplan and an external image. Posted: Thu 2:51 am Post subject: MC-13v2 Freighter Location: Columbus, Ohio, USA, Earth, The Solar System, The Milky Way Galaxy The Rancor Pit :: View topic - MC-13v2 Freighter
0 kommentar(er)
